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I've loved you before.

I loved you once before
never knowing I would
love you again
now your gone and forever
so you tell me
how am I to believe that
when you came back once already
my heart is saying hold on
she'll come back just like before
but my head tells me to let go
trying to tell me you fool
she isn't coming back
i'm not sure which one
I need to trust
they have both lied to me before
but i need her cant she see that
i'm done on my knees every
time she looks at me
can't she see the pain in my heart.

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  • thedarkestjolly
    May 6, 2008
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    It was a little choppy but overall it was an interesting poem good luck!