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monsters and pitiful assholes.

Where do you leave your heart
when you walk out at night?

In the jar of "nevers" and "always"
filled with the acid you coated
my stomach in?

Or the words you choked out,
forced sobs,
every time I turned around;
spilling "I'm sorry"s to the blazing ground
that I lit on fire in a desperate attempt
to erase your mistakes.

To erase every memory that you won't let me forget
of each lie you spit at me.





Hello broken soul;
why do you cry so quietly
when all the world can see your halo melting?

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  • ryanxxx.
    April 6, 2008

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    two thumbs up

    i think that this poem is best commented by bring me the horizon lyrics

    i will always love you. but i need pills to sleep
    i have always failed you. so throw away my memories.


  • David. Enjoy.
    April 6, 2008
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    The imagery in this is astounding. This is written with a remarkably fresh style that really does feel like outside even with the content of the work. The message (what I make of it) is really quite universal since I feel it deals with disappointment in a loved one who's bathing in self-pity.

    Really good. Thanks for a good morning with this one.