The war for life
caged your heart
in broken boxes
with all hope's dreams
Whispering,
new songs
to play,
peace.
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20words
A contest entry
- PIF 10 / 20 / One Hour by Freestyle Bushido.
475 points, ended April 5, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good
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beautifully written, loved the imagery in this piece. Thank you for entering!
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10 minutes to finish!
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