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Far from Hand

I never have finished a book in my life

But I've written quite a few

And my insights of the world, and my way with words
and my analytical thinking...
must have been corrupted

With the words I did not read.

I did not have to see stories
Carefully portrayed in hours before my eyes
Detailed, polished, and inspirational
To learn how to have an imagination.

From years of schooling I have developed
A sense of dismemberment from society

Corrupted we all are, prisoners to conformity.

Exemption would be eden
A promised land, a nirvana absent of company
a paradise to posess


These ideas

These desires

Are all in minds reach.



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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Thank you for your very beautiful and profound entry, of which some parts would come straight from my soul also in thinking, good luck, Josie