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Eternal Life


New day dawns
sun rises on us.
No more war
guns are now
plow shears.
Air we breathe
brings life…

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    awww lovely write
    i adore this, you did excellent for the pormpt
    i had a hard time with it
    good luck
    stephanie


  • Freestyle Bushido
    April 5, 2008
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    beautiful poem, thanks for entering .


  • Grim0
    April 5, 2008
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    Vague

    It's honestly hard to get the picture here, but thanks for trying.