vola sub sole
at supra obscurum marem.
noli licet carmina Furiae-
decepta caede-
illicere te ad pecatum
identidem...
Author notes
From Latin to English:
fly under the sun
but over the dark sea.
don't let the songs of a Fury-
having been trapped by murder-
lure you to sin
again and again.
It may not be perfect, but it's close.
A contest entry
- PIF 10 / 20 / One Hour by Freestyle Bushido.
475 points, ended April 5, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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i absolutely love this in latin. everything is prettier in latin, innit?
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this is over twenty words, I will give a few minutes to correct it.
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It's 18 words. I don't understand.
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