Denouement contingent on constellations
carries us to our destination
As we struggle to be above
commonplace incarnate
while hope increases
A contest entry
- PIF 10 / 20 / One Hour by Freestyle Bushido.
475 points, ended April 5, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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powerful opening lines there Mark ... and it just got better as I read more
congrats on the gold my friend
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there is always that struggle to be above... and with hope, we keep on going... wonderful for this prompt. congrats on the gold.
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Wonderful entry to the contest Mark,good luck
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nice very nice!
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wow
wonderful write
i was stumped by the prompt cause it was hard to follow the lyrics 0.o lol
but great job and good luck
take care
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