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Sequence


Notes transcend into
the rhythm and key
of musical time

The universal sequence
of notes and words
in perfect rhyme



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  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    November 21
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    flawless.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 5, 2008
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    awww, wow this is amazing
    great write and good luckt
    ake care
    stephanie


  • Freestyle Bushido
    April 5, 2008
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    beautifully worded! thanks for entering.


  • Grim0
    April 5, 2008

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    It's a great poem, but I don't think it relates specifically to the Music Video any more than any other well-rhymed melodic song/video.


    • Freestyle Bushido
      April 5, 2008
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      it dosen't have to relate to the video, I just wanted everyone to use the video as inspiration.

      • Grim0
        April 5, 2008
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        I understand, but as an artist of many trades, I feel inspirations to be more connected. I love his poem, nonetheless

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