A new car and 1000 dollars required
As before a month of complete parasitism
The womb was broken; leftover unfixed
Extreme barriers before standards
Romanization of communication
And developed skills taught
My path, my books guiding me
Short circuits still visible
But the target didn't involve society
Modern lies told by the monitors
As the elitist reality of "mates"
Their discharges and sins
Burying their fists and frustrations
The pigs and their mud sinking me
Second homes equally pleasant and raw
The surrogate, despairs' transfusion
Facing disruption of home peace
An easy solution; destiny's dissolution
The grief was shared like oxygen
But the cynic hope denied the requiem
Melodies must sing envy to the aimers
Premature blinks of adulthood
The branches not limiting the touch
Orbits and gravity; collisions of hearts
But cold as the remnants of snow
Programmable endings and a motive glowing
Odes unsung for the beauty of roses
Piano melodies are not eternal
As the corrosive matter less energy
Erodes the memories and the woods
Like a calf trampling a family album
Guilt accepted by traumatic reasons
As the blitz, human mistake, was geriatric
Hunting down the misery of hunters
I skin the bald barbarian results
Sore remnants of broken art in marble
And genocidal wishes and bubblegum
Fixing the broken heart, solid, a statue
A sad radioactive chain reaction afterwards
Toxic wastes are always existent
And along with the scum they inhabit
Machiavellism and curiosity defeated
The strong will standing years ago
And hallucinogen traces of fake happiness
Corrupting innocence, blocking cricket's sighs
Extreme boredom, the emptiness in front
The links to society must be built
Itching greed, a half way to support
And between the columns of isolated vampires
Aryan zealots and Mohawks united
I found no answer but moderators of freedom
Loveless I stand while Tooru sings my life
My brain's shows detected by spots and tests
The reasons for my always misjudged trashworks
Author notes
This is supposed to be an autobiography, however I had to skip most of my issues due to the rules there ("No horror, cutting, death, etc" and "No religion bashing"). I guess I'll be disqualified anyway since this piece of work still features some elements of that. If, for any reason, you don't understand certain parts of the work, feel free to message me. By the way, "Ugly" is the word which defines me the best, besides "Raw", so there you have the reason for the title.
Just so you know, I'm Kyo-N, and I'm probably standing for a position which wouldn't require me having higher family (This means, I don't want to be your son or such stuff).
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Comments
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Great poem. Very well written. THanks heaps for entering and good luck
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Hey. You seem pretty cool too and I know your poetry is awesome because you are one of my favourites
I'd love to have you in my AP family what position do you prefer?
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Only1love4ever-Reply
Hunting down the misery of hunters
I skin the bald barbarian results
Sore remnants of broken art in marble
And genocidal wishes and bubblegum
Fixing the broken heart, solid, a statue
A sad radioactive chain reaction afterwards
Wow, you've blown me away with this. These words are so strong and so unique and so deep.
I can not describe how you have captured the readers full attention. But it just brings the one in aching for more and more and more.
It is truly a sad story and for that I am deeply sorry.
No one should ever have to feel this way.
Life is sometimes just an unspoken destiny, where we often times fall beneath the cracks, tortured, hurt, and mis-lead, and used.
Life doens't have to be like that, and hopefully you are much happier now-a-days.
Thank you for sharing this piece with me.
I am very honored for such a contribution.
God Bless you dear friend.
Good luck and have a wonderful day.
~Only1love4ever -
Very well written piece. Thank you for the entry. :f
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