Take my love and smash it
with laughs
I don't mind when you break
the hearts between my lines
Have your fun mocking my passion
and change the metaphors of my life
into silly similes
Redress my abstract pain
with colourful clown shoes
Be my guest, I don't mind
abuse my feelings
as if they were to amusement
But you damn better make sure
to do it well!
Don't even try to change
a syllable of my thoughts
if can't make my jaws hurt
with delight.
Try me.
Author notes
In case isn't clear up there, my idea to a contest is to change the category of a poem changing the meaning of it. Love to Fun/Silly; Sad to Hilarious
Example, a very good one!
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4061023
A contest entry
- GREAT IDEAS FOR A CONTEST, CONTEST by voices.
300 points, ended April 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sometimes simply by who comments.
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There is no more privacy in this world
What you think of my bunny?
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LOL
lol such a brilliant idea.... but why oh why would anyone want to change ur lovely poems..... nice idea tho..... hugs and kisses Linda xxxxxxxxx
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this is well done in humor and an artful writing, and so right, satire and humor had better be good...PK
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this reminds me sooooo much of the parody on our poems...that's an awesome contest idea..somewhat of a 'roast'...
you should put the link to that poem, too, in your notes, by Ima cucumber.....lol
this is great
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Yes, I just did lol
Imagine a contest with all the entries so funny as his...
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Impossible!
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If Voices uses one of your poems as the one to satirize, I'll enter...10 times!
I like parody, like writing it sometimes too...yep, I'd win the contest too, I know your stuff that well....plus I'm half nuts!
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half? zal wel zijn!!!
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Sure, half nuts, the other half batty.
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