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Vampire For Hire (Chapter 3)

--Chapter three--
The Descent

                             



They drove out of Manhattan and headed to 666 south Pine street. As they got closer to their destination their surroundings became trashier and trashier. It was evident that they were headed to a bad part of town. In the nearby neighborhoods you could see drug dealers, drug addicts and prostitutes in almost every streets.

Finally,
Edward found the address which was a building that looked rundown and abandoned.
They parked across the way in a dark alley undetected.
"We are here sir"
"Good job Edward"
"Sir if you don't mind me asking, what are we facing here?" Edward asked in concern

"We are facing large numbers, some kind of secret underground, probably an organized sex ring and sex trade perhaps. Whatever it may be, I will end it tonight! I will bring it to it's knees!" The vampire was adamant in saying so.

Edward takes out a .45 from the glove compartment making sure the clip within is full.
"Now Edward, listen carefully" The vampire said in a concerned way
Edward gave his full attention.
"You are probably going to hear a lot of screaming, possibly gunshots as well. I want you however to remain here no matter what occurs, do you understand?"
"Understood sir" Edward complied
As Mr grin was about to exit the limo Edward yells out to him, "Sir!"
Mr grin looks back with regard. There was a moment of pause as Edward looked back into the eyes of Mr grin
"Violet.... would have been proud of you."
Mr Grin smiled back "Thank you Edward, that means a lot to me coming from you"
and in the blink of an eye, the vampire disappeared into the darkness.

The stench of human waste was profound. Mostly of urine and uncleanliness. But the vampire still manages to catch the scent of Casey above it all. He knew he was on the right track and that she was nearby. From the outside Mr Grin noticed nothing going on the upper floors of this 6 storie building. He did however remember Mr price, the owner he killed back at the club, mentioning that there was a secret underground area where they kept the the girls. He also remembered him saying that it would be heavily guarded as well.

Mr grin enters the building quietly through the back blending into the shadows within. Inside he saw drug addicts and the homeless people but they posed no threat to him. Old furniture and garbage laid about, scattered all around inside the abandoned building. He walked further in and saw two men standing by a big metal door. One of the men was big and muscular build and over 6 feet tall, the other man, average height and small build.
Before he was ready to confront them, they were approached by two other men. One of the men flashed a police badge and asked if they had received any fresh young girls today. The large guard replied, "Yes vee have yung girl special for you!" The large guard said in a thick Russian like accent. The smaller guard pressed a 6 digit code on a keypad next to the heavy metal door and the door opened to an elevator, an elevator that only went down. Mr Grin now knew this was the entrance he had to go through. The two men entered. The vampire stalked in the shadows waiting for his opportunity to confront the two guards.
As the elevator door closed, Grin approaches. The large guard never seen Mr Grin before and immediately asks, "Vat is password?"
The vampire replied, "Death!"
"dat is not password." The large man said loudly
But the vampire assured him,"Oh, tonight, it is!"
"You must go!" The large man said as he reached for the vampire's arm. In return and swiftly, the vampire grabbed his arm flipping him to the ground.


"Son of Bitch! I vill kill you!" The large man angrily yelled. He got up off the floor and went at Mr Grin again. The vampire came towards him with blinding speed, striking him in the chest that sent him crashing over an old kitchen table breaking it. He got up again and commanded the other guard, "Pedro call guards downstairs now! llame muchacos, Muchacos!" The large man again got up off the floor this time grabbing a thick wooden leg from the broken table. He came charging swinging wildly at the vampire and all the while the vampire and his supernatural abilities dodged every single blow.
The other guard Pedro panicked and quickly grabbed his walkie talkie from under his leather jacket to alert the other guards downstairs. But this was the last thing the vampire wanted. After all, the vampire wanted the upper hand, the element of surprise. The large russian came at him swinging the wooden piece, in return the vampire grabbed the wooden leg taking it from him and threw it at the other man hitting his hand so hard he winced and let out a grunt dropping the walkie talkie. The vampire then quickly jumped up on the large man's back wrapping his arms around his neck choking him from behind. The large man was tough and gave a good fight trying to struggle out of it, but the vampire was stronger and eventually breaks his neck

Kkk,CraAckkk!

The muscular man slumped to the ground, dead. The Vampire looked at the other man and walked over to him taunting, "And now its your turn,.....Pedro is it?"
Pedro on his knees dug his hand under his shirt in a state of panic reaching for something, the vampire slowly approaches showing his fangs as he let out a growl like sound.
Out pulled the hispanic man a small golden cross he had on necklace around his neck. Mr Grin stopped in his tracks, rolling his eyes as he says, "You must be kidding me?!" He immediately picked him up by his leather jacket scrunching him around his neck "Your gold little trinket of religion won't save you!" and he threw him back to the wall, nearly knocking the wind out of him. Pedro begged and pleaded in spanish, "Please don't kill me, please!" The vampire replied also in spanish, He was a vampire after all and has lived for centuries learning very many things in his immortal years, different languages was just a fraction of them.
(SPANISH)
"How many guards are downstairs?!"
Pedro replies, "There are 20 guards downstairs, please don't kill me!" the spanish man yelped. The vampire raises him in the air with one hand still scrunching him by his jacket and demanded another question answered "Where are the girls?!"
"They are locked in a large room!" Pedro responded quickly.

The vampire rips deeply through the spanish man's face with his sharp claws. Pedro yelled in pain as the open gash flowed blood. "What is the number code to the elevator door?!"
"Press 6, six times! Please let me go I told you everything I know, Please don't kill me!" he begged for his life.
"You filthy humans disgust me!" The vampire said to him knocking him out.

Finally,
the vampire enters the elevator after typing in the code and descends.

(To Be Continued)

Note: At this stage I am still working on the story I am sorry, but it will be written very soon, thank you all for taking the time to read my story. I hope you all read soon what the vampire has to go through to save Casey the little girl.
(Three More Chapters to Go)
Coming soon...

Author notes

Still will be working on it, but I am off working on chapter 4 now. However if any of you find fault in a sentence or word, or even spelling, or the way something should sound, please do share your thoughts, thank you.
Hope you enjoy!

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  • A Lonely Soul
    April 8, 2008

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    I think there's a few things that need to be worked on, but then again I'm really tired so I could be wrong. Any way, this is coming out very well hun. I look forward to reading chapter 4, hopefully it'll come soon.
    much love
    ~~Tori~~


  • Starshine on me
    April 6, 2008

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    THis is going great! but you leave us hanging at such exciting moments. Can't wait for the next installment.


    • Immortal Flesh
      April 7, 2008
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      I'm Guilty as charged!

      I'm so sorry yea I know, why do I keep doing this? ughhhh, its frustrating at times. I have so much things of the vampire of what he is going to do to the bad guys and its a lot. But next chapter yea there's going to be blood.....oh yes there will be blood muhahahahaha!
      Anyway, I wanted the reader to understand that what he is doing is brutal, yes, but brutal to the bad people. And saving others while doing so. The next chapter is called "Redemption" and then after that, "The Sacrifice" and then the very last chapter "The Return"
      i was hoping all this was going to be done with just 3 chapters but I had so many ideas that i couldn't fit it all
      Thank you for your comment, and hey its the first comment!!! yayyyyyyy! thank you thank you!!
      I got mail, I got mail, I got mail yayyyyyyyyyyy!