the slams definitely deafened
when pledges playground's realism
made loneliness a pattern
another case with casualties
peering through the keyhole of time
unique yet unequalled
Author notes
Quickie 25 words
Prompt: Promises are sensible until you shut the door and your alone once more- char
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A contest entry
- Charla and Corrines Quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmmmm ... where's the punctuation? (roflmao! sound familiar - isn't that what YOU told ME in one of your contests?!)
gist behind this makes me think though ... wonderful take on the prompt
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Excellent. Alliteration makes me giddy. I love how it all revolved around the door, but didn't get hung up on it. Good luck.
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beautiful... your third line is amazing... best of luck in the contest.
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whisper
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wow!
this is amazing and so beautiful
lovely write and good luck
take cares
*hugs*
stephanie =)
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Good luck momma
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Thank you
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