You have promised me so much.
But you never give what you promise.
You promised to be here for me,
you left.
You promised to give me the world,
you gave me Hell!
Promises, promises do they really mean anything anymore???
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Author notes
"Prompt:
Promises are sensible untill you shut the door and you'RE alone once more -char"
(Char, you're not very good at grammar )
It came off the top of my head, well I gotta go now, hope you like my poem char!!!
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A contest entry
- Charla and Corrines Quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me your HONEST opinion!
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Nice. I like it. But not quite what i was looking for. Its very good for something off the top of ur head Thanks
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speachless
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wow
I have the same thing, this guy i love left me for california and he said he'd take me with him..
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This was a very nice take on the prompt! Very cute, but I kind of think the second to last line was a little random.
But great and powerful last line.
And yes, Char is horrible with grammar. >.< (I want to be an English teacher when I get out of school so this really bothers me.
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Great job on this and good luck in the contest!
~Cassie
PS: Get Him and Her Part 9 done soon!
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i edited it!!
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Interesting thoughts...great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
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i edited the seond to lats line
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I like it better now
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Very thought provocking. Great job. I wonder that myself sometimes. Good luck and I love you.
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ILY2!!
I edited one line if u wanna read it
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where you ever came up with the global warming line i'll never know but it's awesome best of luck. be well and be blessed
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I love your poem Goodluck sweety Oh Gosh I hope that you are not a grammer snob lol Love you goodluck In her contest much love
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Well...
Good luck dungeon damsel! -
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lol, thanks
luck to you too
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