Ribbon unravels toward inevitable cemetery
so enjoy beauty found within life's fabric
and pause not lamenting the frayed edges
instead notice colors along the way
Author notes
Life can't last forever, make the most of it while you are still around. - Corrine
A contest entry
- Charla and Corrines Quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
congrats on the gold
-
I thought this was amazing !!!
Your words are almost like a 'confucius says' thing
well done! (can't believe it didn't even get a greenie!!!!) hmpf!
-
This is wonderful and so full of insight
More people should read this and think about it best of luck sweetie be well and be blessed
-
awww, this is wonderful and beautiful
lovely take on the prompt andgood luck
take care
stephanie
-
Good luck Sonny Son
-
you too!
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
