From the girl that almost had him.
You thought it never hurt.
You think i'll just look past it?
Like the blood stains on your shirt.
From the girl who cried last night
because she understands she never felt his kiss,
she never smelt the sweet embrace..
Of the scent from between his lips.
From the girl who began to trust you,
and all the things you said
but now i think i understand...
Maybe im just misled.
From the girl who never heard the meaning,
of his sweet "I love you"
it was just a lie...
i just heard "I lust you"
From the girl who never had him,
I got hurt here too,
but maybe you cant see that...
Because he had you.
Author notes
I got hurt to, take a look outside the looking glass and see that you wernt the only one hurt.. And what you said killed me hun. You cant see that can you.. your the only one hurt because he was yours... Therefor that cant hurt me i never had him so i cant get hurt..
Thats what hurt me.
xXmorphine liesXx -----Caitlyn
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Comments
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raw, would make a great lyric for a song!
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wow.....this is a beautiful write...the agony of unrequitted love....seeing the tears falling....the description of the piece was my favorite
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Woah I love it
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wow.. this was just wonderful. I can really relate to what you wrote. This was a great poem. However, remember to put the option number in your AN's.
Thanks!
Good luck & thanks for entering!
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I can relate to all this and in a way by not taking the chance or the leap, you do never know as many people have hurt me and I'm afraid of being hurt again, I think that overpowers my want to be loved at the moment, so these words you speak are very real for me, too.
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i don't see these as titles
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just because you didnt have him doesnt mean that you dont care about her enough to get hurt also. when our friends get hurt we feel the pain as fresh and deep as they do. you can feel the pain you might not just show it. the scars are real and the pain is brutal but no matter what you are strong and so is your friend.
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The titles are the last line of each set.
blood stains on your shirt
the scent between his lips
maybe im just mislead
i just heard "i lust you"
because he had you.
[[sorry i hadnt put that in authors notes]]
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