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todays love

today as you passed by
i saw your loving eye
i saw into your soul into you
into the one that noone knew
could ever exist in such a person
the you thats love never worsened
and always cared and loved so deep
everyone sees you as a creep
judging by your image and look
people judging you a book
seeing only the cover not inside
i see the you that you hide
i look inside see the real you
the one that loved and cared and knew
the one that  used to love
the one i used to push and shove
over the edge unfortianatly
i see the you that now hates me

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