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Where You Can't be Found

I don't
want to lose you
...In a way in which you cant be found

I don't
Want you to never be around

I don't
think I'll ever stop...
      my loving you

I don't
anymore, know what to
think or pray or do

You are the sun to my
sky
Apple of my
eye
Reason for my existance
...Place to keep my love

By now all my worries should be spent,
but over you, I'm t w i s t e d
and bent

I don't
want to cry
and

I don't
want you to die

    my love

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  • darkstinger
    April 7, 2008

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    Nicely written Tiffy. I can see that you have an internal fight with knowing you love someone, but you don't want that person to be around. Everything works out for a reason.