Sleepless nights
and meaningless days,
it's all pointless now,
I've nothing to achieve.
Wandering through
days and weeks,
time has no meaning,
it's just a word now.
Nothing to strive for,
nothing to reach,
I have everything that
I've ever wanted.
Almost everything,
I might add,
I just don't have him,
he, who is unattainable.
I gave up,
after countless attempts.
I feel unacknowledged,
I've never felt that before.
A void in my life,
so perfect until now.
why did I meet you,
was it chance or fate?
Is it a punishment?
What have I done wrong?
Maybe "perfect" is unreal,
& fairy tales, deceiving.
A contest entry
- Maddness by GypsyEyes.
450 points, ended May 14, 2008, 46 entries
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Did any parts sound awkward or forced and etc?
Comments
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if only life could be like our wonderful fantasy worlds....great job! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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Thank you and your welcome
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AWWWW i love this poem. Good job cali very well done. I'm so proud of you. When ever will you write about yourself? *sigh* oh well the day will come
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Maybe this IS about me *le gasp*!!!!
HAHAHA, but it's probably not
Fine, I will write a poem about myself xD
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