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She never sleeps

She never sleeps
there isn't time
life is too full
and she mustn't miss a second

She never stops
too much to do
too many people
she cannot waste a moment

Diving into life
all of life
nothing left to chance
nothing missed
always busy
she never sleeps

The clock is her enemy
always chasing time
nothing else she can do
friends to see
new places to be
she never stops

The pity is
she was too busy to see
and missed him

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 7, 2008
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    Thank you for this entry.


  • Punjabi Putter
    April 6, 2008
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    wow what a thought

    this is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed every word of it, its like six sixer in one over


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    This is a wonderful piece. and i thank you for sharing...i am just what this piece says and then some...yet I didnt miss him he missed me...

    passions


  • Gwenevere
    April 5, 2008

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    We can all be guilty of this (I've seen you up until all hours ).It does us good occasionaly to stop and take stock of things if only to see what we've missed.I love the last verse, it added a humerous touch, Ros


  • pantress silver member
    April 5, 2008
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    maybe the brandy keeps her awake. it is a stimulant before it turns into a depressant.


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    April 5, 2008

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    wow!! All through this write i was thinking it sounded like me and then i read the end was like..ohh..boy..hope that didnt happen to me...Its like a slap in the face haha. Totally amazing write as usual babe!!
    MINDIE

  • Thxdr122
    April 5, 2008
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    Damn clocks. Good write!

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