unblinking poems
compulsive raw
stick to white paper
leaving shadows
in shortening winter write
eyes half slit cold
Saturday’s thaw
Author notes
Prompt: Saturday Morning
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie by azure85.
550 points, ended April 5, 2008, 14 entries
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ahhh...you are like me...most of my poems are written in the morning...though they can come anytime...but this poem is chilling as much a work of art you have written...so wonderful to have you back too sweetie...
Mal
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It is good to be back, although my mind is doing better than my body....awk...old age has been putting the screws to me...I need spring and warm sunny weather. I have missed you.
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Carol . . . your poems stick to the pages of my mind no matter what the weather is doing outside . . . Marc
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thank you, dear heart. We are to ahve a few days of balmy weather...how important it is to have one's body absolutely reflect the weather.... The power of now has me in its grips.
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Ah, the chill of Saturday morning. I hope it warms up soon for you, it is warm enough here to have to work in the yard today. Thank you so much!
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