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Eighteen Zero

18 years.
It feels like forever that I’ve stood in one place.

16 Fears
It seems like together,
We’ve only got each other to hate.

14 days.
Nothing in, everything out.
Shutting down.

12 Ways
To turn the tables round

10 Miles
Away from home
Nowhere you know

8 Smiles
So one day is better than the rest
To put your trust in me to the test

6 Denials
Make it all worth while
Easier to swallow whole

4 Recoveries
Make the body die
The soul is whole

2 Times
I’ve tried to tell you the truth,
To save myself, to save you too.

Trying to prove,
We always lose.

Without you I‘m nothing.

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  • cybilseyes silver member
    June 20
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    In a second flat you've made a place in my all time fav's love your work


  • righteousme
    May 6, 2008

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    i like the flow of this piece... i think the numbers helped it along... creative and inspiring.. thanks for sharing...


  • weewatto
    April 6, 2008
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    Love this. Ditto everything Gizzy says, nothing less than we'd expect

    xxxxxxx


  • cookiemonstaa
    April 5, 2008

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    damn.
    you're putting my writing to shame.
    the flow is amazing.
    the content, nothing less than I would expect from you.
    amazing.

    ifly ♥