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Late Morning




Premature rays
shattering the serene slumber
of the disreputable night owl
who graces your presence
long after the cock crows



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Prompt: Saturday morning

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20 words or less

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  • joelegy
    April 6, 2008
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    haha.. this was amazing. another great write!


  • azure85 gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Oh, that night owl! This is a cute poem, and you want that night one to keep it quiet! Thank you so much.