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Who

who knew the world
would end tonight

who knew the heavens
would take our blight

and who knew that nothing
could save us now

and who knew i loved you
cause if they knew
how much i cared
they would have stopped this

some way
some how

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  • Cat10
    April 5, 2008
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    nice! great poem, as usual