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Time Warp

Timeless journey
          into adventure
                  nourishes parched soul
 
            depleted
              and
            welcoming leisure

            to savor
          the sensuality 

              of 

          Saturday 

                  morning

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  • carole21
    May 19, 2008

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    nice write for the prompt . . liked "depleted and welcoming leisure" and "to savor the sensuality" .. well done . .


  • paulcreates silver member
    May 9, 2008

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    Yup This pretty much sums up the wonder of coffee!

    nice one Patsy!
    Paul


  • azure85 gold member
    April 5, 2008
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    A very nice poem on the prompt, thank you so much.