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Lost

Teardops, frozen time.
Hearts, forever intertwine.
Once, your breath was mine.
Love, never to be thine.
Saturday, isolation reigns divine.

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  • azure85 gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Ah, an excellent poem of love lost, with a wondferful rhyme contained within each heartbeat. Thank you so much.