The wind was her friend,
whispering soft songs
as thoughts of solitude grew
more inviting
with freedom’s calling
and a troubled spirit knows
when to fly away,
leaving harsh reality behind,
for a more
peaceful existence.
Author notes
Picture prompt-Image is from deviant art: http://oldschooltime.deviantart.com/art/It-Will-Come-The-Nightmare-81928543
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Megy206.
425 points, ended April 25, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed this. It was clear,simple and flowed really well. I really liked the bit: "and a troubled spirit knows when to fly away, leaving harsh reality behind..."
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Wow.. this really touched me! You could be talking about me at the moment with this write *sigh*
Just brilliant!
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awww wow! wonderful write
great for the pic
good luck and take care
stephanie
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this is lovely. soft and tender. fits the picture really well.
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The following lines are very meaningful.
leaving harsh reality behind,
for a more
peaceful existence.
I like your quickie. designed beautifully with appropriate words and photo. Very creative.
Love & Peace
Bin
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You wove an entire life story through ten lines that fitted the picture perfectly. Best wishes in the contest, dear.
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