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Good Gallop

Sunrise dancing
Hoofbeats falling
Sweat glistening
Nostrils flaring
Hearts thundering
Lungs heaving
Good gallop
Saturday morning.

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  • azure85 gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Ah, that would be a wonderful way to spend a Saturday morning! I can hear the hoofbeats throughout your poem, thank you so much!