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Mirror of Antagonism

He is fleeing it
He is trying to escape it
He is flying away from it
He is ignoring it
But it can not be stopped

It is a force so powerful
With it’s possessive pull
By probability and perfection
It goes every direction

She is fleeing it
She is trying to escape it
She is flying away from it
She is ignoring it
But it can not be stopped

It is a force full of fury
It finds you in a hurry
Ferocious and Fantastic
Its hit is drastic

They are fleeing it
They are trying to escape it
They are flying away from it
They are ignoring it
But it can not be stopped

It strikes with thunder
It is full of wonder
Terrific yet Terrifying
It is always trying

We are fleeing it
We are trying to escape it
We are flying away from it
We are ignoring it
But it can not be stopped

It is our sad fate
That we should see such hate
Yet it is our humble opportunity
To see such love and unity

It will not flee us
It will not escape us
It will not fly away from us
It will not ignore us
It will not stop

It will try to prove that you are the antagonist
While you try to prove you are the protagonist
It is humanity’s dualistic life
Which brings such satisfaction and strife

It is us
It is you
It is me
It is we
It is they
It is everyone

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  • Violent Serenity
    April 15, 2008

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    oh interesting, nice style and wording here. lol still trying to find the hidden message but well done, keep it up, and good luck in the contest ^.^


  • elmundopasa1
    April 6, 2008

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    hmm. a very interesting write. well written and overall a good job. thanks for writing and entering.