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Dont read yet- not finished- no time to finish yet

Useless soul being eaten outside in
Syringe stealing the pain, ending the sin
Mummified pain to die like nothing
Fear is hate, its real its something
Damsel maybe but no where near distress
Clamped up thoughts soon to be headlined press
Stale unconsciousness, a bitter sweet dream
A life less corpse, heart torn, no seams

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Prompt 6

Dark and twisted.. Hope thats okay.

A contest entry

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  • High-on-Death
    April 15, 2008

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    I'm not sure if you've finished this yet, could you let me know?
    And if not - the contest closes in 2 days and I'm not extending it.