I have become lost
in dreams of Tye-dye
where the colors speak
what's with-in my heart
and the wind has seen my thoughts
where moment with you are suspended in time
and naught will matter
upon the suns first rays
when the world wakes from its slumber
and everything is as it was
where you are not by my side
but until those first morning rays
I shall be lost in Tye-dye dreams.
Author notes
the lion king
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Comments
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this was realllly cute!!
I like it a lot!!
I like the idea of tye-dye dreams XD
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This is a very interesting write. Perhaps the grammar could be tweaked a bit? But I like it. It's calm and makes me think of summer mornings. Good luck, love.
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When I write I let the words flow from my heart, and usually don't edit them until later down the road when I have not read them in a while. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this.
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