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Passion's Promise

Her hotel was just across the street.

  She thought one last treat on the town tonight.

How she bathed and dressed in her best.

  She was more than just a guest.

For tomorrow she would be another working slave.

 

He had been in town for several days.

  He brought in things to show and give.

Kissed hands and soft cheeks all day

  Clasped hands and said that is Ok.

Time He was treated like a man tonight.

 

He pulled in with his fancy car, his delight.

  Out of the car, to the door he was ushered in.

A table for one is what he said, then headed for the bar.

  In she came, as all eyes went her way.

He looked up and to her way.

 

Off she went to the center of the room.

  His head hung in gloom.

He was seated behind her seat.

  She never moved, his heart skipped a beat.

The music was that come on and let's dance.

 

Someone beat him at the pass.

  He  had ordered dinner, as she sat down.

She ordered dinner while he waited around.

  Then of to the ladies room she went.

That is about how the rest of the evening went.

 

Finally He asked care for a drink, she turned around in her seat. 

  He smiled and she did the same.

Finally at the other table that was each others game.

  He wanted to show her the town.

How about a ride in my car.

 

Off The went into the night.

  Breathless as they were at first sight.

He said from my balcony you can really see all of the stars.

  Back to town, as she thought, so can I.

"So this is your room?" she said "behind mine."

 

 

 

 

4-4-2008

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M.Cheadle mac #4 passionn's promise or Romantic rendezvous and maybe a little form the picture if He is lucky.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    This indeed was a powerful read, had me on the edge of my seat wondering. Now, only thing i need name and option number in the author notes so i can add this piece to finalists.
    Thanks for a lovely entry.Good luck to you.

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