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What if two kids at a carnival is our perfect metaphor?

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008

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    This is qute creative. I have never seen anything even close to like this before. quite a great what if question. You even managed to stay poetic, that takes skill. great thouguht provoking question