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Beautiful Victim..

Welcome my beautiful victim, to [the night you'll never forget]...
As I hit record on the camera, and bind you down to this bed,
this is promised to be the best night of your short lived life..

The horror in your eyes gives me such a rush..
it makes my mind go insane, giving me images of just what
I'd love to do to you...
With my blade gliding itself up and down your thighs,
as the smell of fear comes seeping through your veins..
I know you like it.

Don't worry,
it will be over before you know it.
A few more hours of fucking your brains out,
and a few more hours of slicing your body..
oh, it'll all be over soon.
I'll fuck you so hard that your entire body will shake,
and I'll cut you so deep that you'll swear it went through the bone..

Watching and hearing you scream gets me off so fast..
it's as if you know exactly what I like.
You scream "psycho" in my face,
and try to claw at my skin..
but don't you understand?!
I'm ejoying every moment of it..
every screaming word, and every scratch that your little finger nails
leave on my body;
Oh god do I love it all..

As you scream for mercy, and I watch your blood drip from your throat,
your thighs, even your vagina..
I know I'll re-watch this tape over, and over, and over.

Seven hours later, and I've finally had my full of you, beautiful victim..
Your throat slashed, your thighs ripped apart, your entire body..
motionless, and covered in pure and innocent blood..
Yes, I have had my full now.

Watching you suffer, wathcing you cry in pain, feeling you try to push me off,
feeling myself inside of you, feeling my blade rush apon your cold and oh so innocent skin,
the feeling of your eyes on me, the rush from cutting my initials into your thigh...

I know you felt the rush too..
I know you enjoyed this just as much as me..

As I look at your body and stand above you one again,
I ask,
"Beautiful victim, didn't I tell you this would be a night that you'd never forget?"

Author notes

I'm hoping that this is what you're looking for..I never wrote anything like this before, so I hope it's okay..

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  • Ratfink
    February 2

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    Wow, a poem from a truley insane person!! Haha, I'm just joking. I think this was pretty good for a theme you don't really write on. The images flowed and it WAS really morbid. I am sure you could make it even more dark. Haha. Well, keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest.


  • HereComesTheSun
    January 31
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    Postive: really well written and the image of what is going on in this just really blows a person away i am in shock after reading great job getting to the reader well done

    Negative: just dont want to premote this sorta of thing as postive...

    thanks for entering


  • xmel.murdermex
    April 6, 2008
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    Graphic

    I love this. Very graphic and detailed to the bone. Love it :]


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Wow fab piece, very graphic description that always go down well here...lol. Love this, superbly penned all the best in the contest with it

  • bwaomega
    April 5, 2008
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    Very nice work. I wish I had written it first.


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    April 4, 2008
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    UH.....

    THIS IS MORE THAN WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR!
    Holy fuck, it's like your friggen inside my head,
    as a victim, i'd seriously LOVE TO DIE THIS WAY!!!!
    IF I HAD A CHOICE, I'D CHOOSE TO DIE THIS WAY!
    Wow,
    just, seriously, haha, this was hot as hell
    someone could easily get off to this, haha
    thanks so much for your entry

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