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Jealousy

Jealousy is rottenness to the bone,
and can cause a separation of friends

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Jealousy is_____

Just fill in the blank, no poetry needed

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  • daviscth silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Your words are so true my dear friend. a little can be a nice compliment, a lot can be a huge problem.


  • crimsondew
    April 4, 2008
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    Jealousy does that..should stay a mile away from it...
    All the best!


  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008

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    Okay this has meanign and i see your intentions, but between bone and cause i think you need and can otherwise it doesn't make sense and confuses the reader. if you fix that then it will makee sense.