I observered our love
through rose tinted glasses
ignoring the obvious smudges and
stains you smeared them with.
You created that spot
in my flawless heart...
There the blemishes remain.
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Wits and Logic in Abundance...
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Very sweet but sad
These things can hurt forever. Very well written, it pulled on my heartstrings.
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I wear glasses and have been smudged in more ways than one and totally get this... Nice!
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This one squeezes a tear from my heart. Well written emmotions here.
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