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Out, Out

Push them out,
Tossed into the wind,
worries that spear your
sadly thinned skin.

Let go of doubts
that drag you down.
Release yourself from the need
to be perfect.
Tear it all down and
shred each sin that makes you feel
guilty.

The sweet aroma of
petals in the wind,
your release from everything
that weighs you down.

So soothing to be free again.

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  • Spiritual Soul
    April 6, 2008

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    This whole poem was so light and breezy, I liked this very inspirational! Thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • layla.
    April 6, 2008
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    your ending is light and serene...


  • Jaden silver member
    April 4, 2008
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    nice.