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Sedative

I just wanna lay with you,
Your warmth and smell
Wrapped around me like a blanket.
Your hands
My only clothes.
Your words, as always
A lullaby

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nah ur on ur own
-pt-

well dont just read it. tell me what ya think

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  • BehindTheShadow
    April 4, 2008
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    I liked this. Few words but big picture!!!