My hearts been through more
Then you could ever imagine
The rules have been broken
And lines have been crossed
But, even still
I'll give you my heart
But please, promise me
Promise me
You'll hold it soft
Promise me
You won't turn away
Promise me
To keep it with yours
Forever
Promise me
To hold it when it's lonely
Promise me
To nurse it when it's sick
Promise me
To sing it to sleep
Promise me
To hold it close
To never let go
Forever
With my heart
In your hands
You'll see my mistakes
You'll see my better days
The pain, the suffering
The love, the happiness
If you can promise me this
Then I'll promise to you
To take care of yours
I'll promise you
I'll hold it soft
I'll promise you
That I won't turn away
I'll promise you
That I'll keep it with mine
Forever
I'll promise
To hold it when it's lonely
I'll promise
To nurse it when it's sick
I'll promise
To sing it to sleep
I'll promise
To hold it close
To never let go
Forever
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hi Sam
Truly a lovely and heartfelt write of someone that is dear to you..
the repetition of your phrases soothes and brings sighs to the heart!
Lovely... very lovely!!
Good to see you are posting
Be well my friend!
Linda
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I really like this ^.^ The beginning is great, it flows right into the body of the poem. The repetition of the phrases is nice and has a sort of soothing effect. I liked that you went into how you will promise back; it was unexpected for me and kept me interested. Great write!
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