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a Friday Night Special

This is the night my hero
  Will be treated like a king

To the hair dressers, so I can look just so.

  Off for a new outfit now and after hours.

Damn I had best hurry, and write and cross off as I go.

 

Now what is best for dinner.

  Do I want to cook, let's see.

So much to do----

There is a friend i must day "Hi"

Damn some man bumped into me.

 

I wasn't even in the car.

  Somebody is trying to stick it to me.

Well about dinner, let me see

  Some nice flowers would be nice.

Damn there goes a runner, these stockings are shot.

 

Well I had best fix dinner.

  It is almost four o'clock

Time is a flying.

 My nails are a shining at last.

Damn I sure meant to get gas

 

Well I am home at last.

  Let these fingers do some walking.

I'll have everything under control at last.

 "Hon can you pick up dinner?"

Damn the day has gone by too fast.

 

4-5-2008

 

 

 

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MY GIVE A DAMN IS BUSTED
M.CHEADLE - MAC

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  • Sandygram silver member
    April 4, 2008

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    I do love the story you have written with your words. Very caring and loving depicting how life is for many couples. Beautiful write with a cute ending!!! Many Blessings dear friend. Have a lovely weekend.

    Always,
    Sandy