Everyday you are there
I see you but cannot touch
I hear you but cannot speak.
I watch your every move
I long to do things for you
I long to do things with you.
You smile as you go by
You reach out to touch
You ruffle my hair..
I know you feel I am very young
But I cannot help responding to you
Puppy love is painful when you’re a dog!
Author notes
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A contest entry
- ...:::Secret Love:::... by Lislaine.
525 points, ended April 5, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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its such an adorable poem!! awww! makes my heart jump with happiness!!!
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Thanks for reading and writing.
Jim
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Well I have Poodles and this is so adorable...
looks a little like my Rusty...
thanks for the read tonight/today whatever it be in your part of the world...
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Thanks for stopping by. I have no dogs but i did help look after a poodle once. A large one though not a toy.
Jim
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Well this is very cute poem. And that's a nice picture of a puppy. Is it yours?
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Afraid I don't have any pets BM. My timetable is too erratic.
Promise not to tell the internet police but I c&p'd this image from the WWW.
Jim
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Sweeeeeeet!
What a take on how a puppy in love must feel.
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Why thank you pinkink.
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Very, sweet, cute, melancholy poem. Loved the read.
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Thanks for reading and writing.
jim
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That is so cute Jim,
What breed is the puppy - it's lovely!
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I'm sorry I never asked. Probably it is a Fred Bassett's Allsorts!!
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Give that puppy some love!
The picture is lovely, the poem I enjoyed a lot, both sides of it
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The puppy is getting all the praise
Thanks for reading and commenting on it.
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Oh...hm, sending some *heart* to you too
can't make those new (now old) smileys
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Very Nice
What a simple and sweet poem.The last line is excellent, Love is much more painful when one is not a dog.
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Thanks for your comments Ahkam but surely love can also be much sweeter if one is not a dog? At least one hopes so.
Jim
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this is a really good piece, very sweet.!
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Thanks for reading and writing.
Jim
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nice
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Thanks for stopping by
Jim
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cute ...
and fun to explore the metaphor as well! joy
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I enjoy trying to give a harmless little twist in some of my work and the contest rules provided a great excuse here.
Jim
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Thanks for reading and writing L.E.
Jim
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Jim
Do you have a dog? It would seem that you appreciate these animals. At least in passing.
Interesting and humourous perspective in your write.
Jim
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No Jim alas I do not have any pets (or live in animals ) but if I did I would chose a , probably a spaniel.
Thanks for your appreciation, it's good to know people can appreciate what I try to do.
Jim
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heh.. your tendancy are in humor these days! funny!
i love puppy more than human
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Sometimes I'm funny and sometimes I fail Thanks for sticking with me NouNou.
Jim
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ILR - from the photo, it's good to see that you are staying on the paper!!
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I'm only young and accidents happen
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Sweet :)
Cute Poem
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Still only cute I'll have to bite somebody
Jim
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Are you a dog lover?
Regardless,you are a truly empathetic soul. It brings to mind the feelings of devotion,rejection,desperation and loyalty. All words that define a dog.
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Thanks once again for reading and writing.
I do like most dogs but my life style doesn't let me 
commit to one in particular. My schoolboy nickname was "Fred Bassett" after the famous cartoon hound 
Jim
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hello my dear uncle,
You know why I clicked on your poem? For it was in "love" category and I didn't remember I had read any love poem of yours! lol...anyway, I enjoyed reading your puppy love poem and oh..yes..of course I loved the photo!
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Hi nice niece,
Yes I'm not a great one for "love" poems but that was what the contest asked for and I enjoyed twisting the tail (of the poem not the) with this one.
Jim
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awwww... very nice!!! i really liked this one... its soo cute... good luck in the contest! again (lol)
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Hmm 'cute'!
With that picture I thought I'd at least rate cuddlesome
Thanks for the inspiration of your contest theme.
Jim
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Adding your comment:
really nice x
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