What if life was actually really easy and love was simple?
A contest entry
- Fill In The Blanks by Blooming Poet.
360 points, ended April 18, 2008, 109 entries
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if life was easy, we wouldn't have much of a life, complications help us grow as a person.And if love was simple? I have no idea!Would it ever be like this! I really enjoyed this, talent!!!Loved it, it really got me thinking which is what i like to find in poetry and writing etc
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A simple line but then the world still wouldn't be perfect, I guess since we need obstacles to overcome them and learn from them
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Too much like right?
Crazy how we contribute so easily to its' complications, huh? I like the thought-factor here. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it.. Was a little weird for me to write.. I had never done a one liner before..lol.
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Simple
then we would still be monkeys, ever notice how they don't care. What if we could keep the vision we once had as a child when love was easy just a reaction to breathing, life was fun and simple then. We will never see that clear again but then again What if..
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haha.. you and those damn monkeys Lol..
Yes what if..lol. thanks for the comment..
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it would not be bioring, that is for sure. well done.
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Ah, then life wouldn't be very interesting at all, and there'd be no good poetry in the world!
Nice one-liner!
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Nice
If that was so, life would be pointless. Thats a real eyeopener, I liked it. -
Ah Jetleena!
You may love my son, Herman! He says Life is simple, souls make it complicated.
If you think of it, it is true, not so? Love should be VERY simple. Your sentence stressed that.
Wondrous.
Love
Myra
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Good question. You made the reader stop and think. Thanks!
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Then things wouldn't mean as much as they do. To truly no happiness, you also have to know sadness as well to appreciate it. Very nice poem.
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That would cool...and maybe just a little too predictable?
Great question that inspires all kinds of thoughts,
and images for us to chew upon!
Is it the hunt or the chase, that makes life such a fun
contest?
Is the gatherers or the collectors that create treasures
for all of us to enjoy!
love it, developing a philosophical soul you are!
well done!
ears/Proud granny !!
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These words are so true, I don't know why as humans we seem to like the complicated route. The true meaning of life is so simple and easy, you don't need a degree to have respect and love for everything around you, yet sadly so many of us lack it. Awesome write. Best of luck in the contest.
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What if is riight. i wsh all the time life was easy and didn't take so much effort, but I guess on the flip side that would get awfully boring. I also wish love was simple and didn't hurt, but I guess you learn from that too.
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then there would be no need for love songs or power ballads....awww, a world of perfection! nice take on the prompt sis!
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