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Die like you mean it.

We play a perpetual cat and mouse game of hide and seek.
 Run,run with me lets run.
I taunt you like a child,nana,nana you can't catch me.
you came close but I cheated you and ran away when you turned your head for a moment.
Now you have caught me.
go, go on cut me down
I am ready, I am ready to go
Come on do it
Do you got the stones.
Death doesn't kill me.
Death cheats me.

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Die like you mean it

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  • TheNymph
    April 5, 2008
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    this is different, catchy, a curious balance of innocent and dark. i really enjoyed reading it.


  • a dying soul x
    April 5, 2008
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    its good i like it
    i like the cat and mouse game
    reminds me of a song


  • individuality gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry penned with some nice dark imagery floating through to the eyes, good luck in the contest.