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Ode to my love one

whispering lips
that smooth out all
hurt and pain,
turning the world to a
silken rush about my flesh.
Blue eyes adorned with
black lace,
So beautiful, so god-like,
Stealing a young girl's breath.
Skin soft like velvet,
so filled with warm, pulsing life.
Brushing a tingling rush
Through my flesh.

And ode to my loved on,
Words that don't reach
Deep enough for others to know
What fire burns here.

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and ode to west <3

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