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Into Africa: A Tribute to Dan Eldon (1970 - 1993)

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A/N: If you are unacquainted with Reuter's youngest photojournalist and artist Dan Eldon, please take a few moments to copy the following links into your browser and view these two short videos before reading the poem. You will find yourself forever changed. The events leading up to Eldon's tragic death in Mogadishu at the age of 22 are documented in the acclaimed film "Black Hawk Down". His extraordinary legacy continues to inspire people all around the world. 

Thank you, Nancy


The Art of Life - Part 1: http://youtube.com/watch?v=ZxxgetWUi1o
The Art of Life - Part 2: http://youtube.com/watch?v=wZQWX5tGZFs

INTO AFRICA

Africa was never my itinerary,
the route clearly marked on my ancestral map of Ireland,
spread out on the floor like a patchwork quilt
so I could smooth out the crinkly creases
that never folded up the same way twice.

My eyes drifted toward Africa
and I saw your face gazing back at me
from old photographs I’d seen in books,
your hair and smile so present I felt
I could stretch my hand through time
and gently touch them.
I wanted to trace the boyish curves and lines
of your cheekbones and shoulders
now embraced only by paper borders.

I look at your journals
and colors shoot out like kaleidoscope flashes,
imprinting pictures onto my retinas.


You didn't see me watching you
through the time lens of my mind
as you worked your secret alchemy with paints and brushes,
composing with tape and glue the detritus of your day
that lay scattered on the floor,
your feet scuffing and rearranging it yet again.

Your translucent form shimmers above images
that capture your spirit like a camera.


Moving across the pages,
my fingers trekked savannas and canoed rivers
and, when I looked at them,
instead of my own whorled prints
I saw the dark contours of Africa
inked into the tips
like black tattoos that wouldn’t come off.

You invite us into your fire circle
as if you are some tribal elder
imparting ancient wisdom from the gods.


I folded my map, turned away from Ireland,
and crossed into Africa.

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  • Benrutter2
    July 16

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    This is an amazing text. The whole piece has such an epic feel. I had to read it 5 or 6 times just to make sure I took everything in. There is so much more said than I though could be possible in this length of a poem.

    The ending "and crossed into Africa." is triumphant, uncertain and a celebration of the photojournalist this is dedicated to, bassically, everything a good last line should be.

    Truly amazing piece of work.


    • MoonLady gold member
      July 17
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      The Journey is the Destination

      That was Dan's philosophy of life and he lived it to the fullest every minute while he was alive, although his time here was all too brief. There is never a satisfactory or rational answer to the question of why a person - so often a good and extraordinily kind person like Dan - was in the wrong place at the wrong time. And then there's the irony that the very culture Dan provided so much love and help to ultimately took his life, and in such a brutal way: stoning and machete blows by an angry mob (see the film "Black Hawk Down" for the true events leading up to Dan's death, along with several other photojournalists at the scene.)

      Writing "Into Africa" was an effort that came from a part of me that has been so deeply moved by Dan's artwork, journals, gut-wrenching photographs for Reuters, and his global outreach and commitment to combating the poverty of the African people. I used poetic imagery from many resources to create a tribute that I wanted to be a celebration of his life, rather than focusing on his death - and I wanted to express that Spirit can outlive the physical body and continue a person's work beyond a scope ever imagined by that person while alive. It's very possible that "Into Africa" may be a poetic effort that I will never surpass - it is definitely the best poem I've ever written.

      Again, thanks for your in-depth comments and letting me know that the poem impacted you on a personal level. If you didn't have time to view the two short video documentaries on YouTube I provided the links to, I know you'd find them very moving and informative.

      Here's to Dan!! ML

  • Dawnkj63
    April 28, 2008
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    Excellent

    This is a truly beautiful and compelling work.

  • kb11
    April 28, 2008
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    Marvelous

    Inspirational is correct!