i see him every day
i want to tell him how i feel
but the fear of rejection holds me back
i have admired him for too long
his smile makes my body quiver
when he talks to me i cant help but laugh
when he walks past me in the halls
i fake a smile so he doesn't see the pain he is causing me
when he talks about this other girl
i want to shake him and tell him i am the girl he wants
this feeling is something i have never felt before in my life
i feel sad, happy, alone, confused, sick, angry, and alive
all at the same time
he makes me feel like the most beautiful girl in the world
but i can't have him
my love for him must stay a secret
if i tell him how i feel i could lose my best friend
but if i don't i lose the love of my life
what should i do?
A contest entry
- ...:::Secret Love:::... by Lislaine.
525 points, ended April 5, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow. This was wonderful. I'm starting to fall in love with your writings. lol. Seriously. You write simple poems but there's so much behind it, as well. You know what I think? I think there are so many girls who've gone through that.
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Just a little old prayer that might help.
God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, Courage to change the things I can and Wisdom to know the difference.
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i really like this one great write i feel the emotions rushing through this poem like no other ive read before excellent job.
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That's so very beautiful and very relatable.
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You have a very unique style of writing. I enjoyed it and it's a fresh breath of air to see people are still writing their feelings out without worrying about some kind of literature rule.
Poetry isn't about rules, it's about expression.
Great piece.
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Oh wow, I'm sorry about your situation. I wish I could help you but I can't. Congratulations on winning bronze. This was a great poem.
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hmm. thats a hard desicion... ouch.. that must hurt really much... liked it! good luck!!
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Its a hard situation to be in. Personally I do not think there is one right answer or one wrong answer. With this kindof thing its nto painted outin black and white
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