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Baby, I Love You

There is only one guy
Who makes my heart quicken.
He is tall and blond,
With staggering blue eyes.

He knew I loved him.
But now,
I have no idea.
So I want to let him know.

I want him to know
How much he means.
I want him to know
How much I think of him.

I want this man of my dreams
To know what I think of him.
I want him to know
What I feel for him.

I feel secretive passion
And startling love.
I feel like the world would end,
Had he not been with me before.

When he walks in the door,
My blood runs faster,
And I am always wondering
If he knows that I stare at him
With longing in my eyes.

I want the man of my dreams
To know this one single thing.
I want him to know
That I love him.

I love him because of his personality,
And I love him because of his looks.
But mostly I love this wonderful guy
Because he loved me for me.

Author notes

This is about Daniel. He and I were together but ended it about a year and four months ago. I don't know if he know that I still love him, but I really want him to know. I am always hoping that he still loves me.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    April 28, 2008

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    ik its so hard to tell a boy you still like him
    i had to write a 4 page note to tony explaning it but well done


  • Lislaine
    April 4, 2008
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    aaww soo beautiful i loved it! thx again for entering. good luck!