Time stops.
Your eyes grow wide.
Your jaw drops.
You can't help but tremble.
With out warning.
With out thinking
you scream.
A contest entry
- ~Ghost~ by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended April 11, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
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what do you think.
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WOW
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I think that you have done an excellent job in getting the concept of fear across in this poem.
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This is an awsome poem! All of your poems are terrific! When you make poems you describe them reaally grreat. I stink at typing.
I think this is one of my favorites. I like funny poems though. Do you have any happy ones at least. 
-Beyond Da` (Awsome) Craziness
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Thank you for your entry, good luck, Josie
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