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Scripting The Heart

Fustrated world thats so unkind,
This corrupted justice that leads the blind,
Breaking free I walk alone,
Fearing this place that people call home.

Dark Angels seem to comfort me,
With devine eyes the truth they'll see,
A blackened heart frozen to the core,
This way you cant hurt me anymore.

I fear going through the pain,
Of losing someone so close again,
To avoid such heartache my risks are few,
But I'd be letting this chance walk by with you.

So before its too late I'd like to say,
For you I've always felt this way.

By Marc. C. Gillings

Author notes

It has been a long while since I have been to this place. I almost feel a veterain to the site now. But the return of this Raven to the nest is LONG overdue =x=

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  • D.s
    April 4, 2008
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    Awesome!

    Really a nice piece of work mate.


    • blackwizard1988
      April 4, 2008
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      Thanks

      Cheers for the comments dude. I got some really old works up on this thing. I think I might pull my fingure out of my arse and make the effort to put these other works up. Trbl is I keep getting bombarded with bloody msn windows. Ever suffer this problem?
      Sparky =x=