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Hold My Sandals

broken kisses and
epitomes
been on my knees
bitch please
u DO remember me
a broken promise
on the premise
of love
no one saved me
just some dumb love
punch drunk
and highway handles
no one knows
so i just wear sandals
the free bit
on my toes
do u wanna know?
come here i'll tell you
just look around
it surrounds you
you freak
you just wanna be neat
and tidy
well too bad u lied to me
you just a half ass
in the past

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  • LordChronic
    April 9, 2008

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    i love this, the flow is awesome and rhymes perfectly after another. thanks fro the comment too, but this is awesome work.


  • Three Doves
    April 4, 2008

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    Talk about woe is me.
    Still a good write in its sadness.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah