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Today is...
The last day of my life
The last day I get to say goodbye
The last day to express my feelings for you
Today is...
My last chance to touch you
My last chance to say I love you
My last chance to stare at you all night
Today is...
Wanting one last kiss
Wanting to make love to you
Wanting to hear your hearbeat next to mine
Today is the best day of my life

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  • peridotPixi
    April 4, 2008

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    i like the feelings this poem has its really deep and im not sure if i like the last day of my life part, im not really into that but i love the ending as it is the best day of your life, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy